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jennythereaderI really would like some feedback on my latest poem.
Defining Home
I'm not quite satisfied with it, but can't figure out where it needs improvement.
If anyone out there has suggestions, I'd love to hear them.
Defining Home
I'm not quite satisfied with it, but can't figure out where it needs improvement.
If anyone out there has suggestions, I'd love to hear them.
