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Early Spring

bare brown branches
against a smoky blue sky
no frost of leaves
softening their lines

and yet...
signs of spring appear

a single blade of grass
shows green through dead leaves

a brown bird hops across a lawn
its red breast a spark of warmth

cool breeze chases white clouds across the sky
sun shines warm against skin

Nice!

Date: 2008-04-03 02:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] siegerat.livejournal.com
And appropriate, given that it's NaPoWriMo, apparently. :-D

Re: Nice!

Date: 2008-04-03 02:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jennythe-reader.livejournal.com
Thank you! Watch this space, it will evolve throughout the day.

I did not know about NaPoWriMo. I'll have to find out more.

Re: Nice!

Date: 2008-04-03 03:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] siegerat.livejournal.com
:-) Look forward to the evolution.

Here is a link with some NPWM info: http://readwritepoem.org/

Poems

Date: 2008-04-04 02:33 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Keep writing honey!!!
Love,
Dad

Re: Poems

Date: 2008-04-04 03:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jennythe-reader.livejournal.com
:-)

This one didn't need as much editing as the last one (http://jennythe-reader.livejournal.com/86383.html).

I added to the original idea, but didn't make many changes.

Date: 2008-04-05 02:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] longlongwaytogo.livejournal.com
Hi, just a note to say that I invited you to a dollhouse miniatures community. You'll be able to find the invite under 'communities' then 'manage your invites'. Turns out LJ doesn't notify for invitations.


Also, that's a really relaxing poem. :)

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